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in dark broken cities :edit: by AkaPanuka in dark broken cities :edit: by AkaPanuka
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SOZ FOR THE SPAM! I DIDN'T UPLOAD THE FINAL PICTURE LOL
THERE ISN'T MANY CHANGES BUT YEA, THIS IS THE FINISHED PICTURE SO NOW YOU MAY ENJOY
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because there are no words I can use to describe my love for Cian and 13 :U

UMM YEA, USED THIS AS A CHANCE TO DRAW BUILDINGS AND THAT. stayed simple so I didn't have to show you how bad I really am haha. I used google sketch up to help me with perspective of the buildings -u-

I PUT SO MUCH EFFORT INTO THIS OMG. I kinda like how this turned out however Cian looks horrible omg. Lox and the background I like.

I'M SO BAD AT HUMANS, THAT'S WHY I'M GOING TO DRAW AN UNREASONABLE AMOUNT OF THEM IN AN ATTEMPT TO GET BETTER HAHAHAHA

omg Cian why so angry you don't get angry what is this? Did Amber make you feel bad again omg

Art and Cian (c) to me
#The-Projects (c) to =Seasonfluff
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Ok, so I don't do this often, but I felt like I should help out a friend, plus I love Cian, plus.... Well I love this piece XD

Ok for starters I want to tell you that you did an amazing job on this. <3 Im going to start below however, on the points that could improve.

I see nothing on the background or Lox. So I'll work on Cian.

The biggest thing is his proportion. His legs are too short and his torso is too long. Now his torso should probably stop where the green shirt stops and the legs need much more length.

The best references for a position like this would be horse jockeys. Although I'm sure there are major differences in riding a tattoo wolf vs a horse, but yeah XD Here is a good example.

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of course that is with a saddle, but its just an idea.

I also want to talk about what really works for this piece! The lighting and motion going on in this piece is just amazing! I love the detail and line work and the background! The graffiti really helps set the setting :3

I hope that helped some XD I dont think i probably did but yeah XD
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EpicLolipopz Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
HOLYY SHI-
YOU, BRO,BROBROBROBRO GOT SOOO MUCH BETTER QAQ <333333
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AkaPanuka Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PFFTTTT
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EpicLolipopz Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
WUT. WUT. YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH MY COMMENT BRO? HUH? HUH? YOU WANNA GO? YOU WANNA GO? :iconfuuuplz:
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AkaPanuka Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEA I HAVE A PROBLEM
COME AT ME BRO
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EpicLolipopz Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
OKAY BRO. OKAY. *comes at palk*
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AkaPanuka Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BRING IT
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EpicLolipopz Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
OKAY BRO. HERE I COMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEE*tackles palk*
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AkaPanuka Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHOAH BROOO *is tackled*
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Aspyluff Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Akaaa This looks so amazing!!!! OuO I love this so much! The background! And Ciannnn uurrrgggg and thoes eyesssss just awesome!
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AkaPanuka Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jlksflksdf thank you! >u<
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